Sunday, August 31, 2008

My shot at Poetry

The Three Doors


It was more than just a vague dream.

I stood, staring at three doors,

Three ways to live my life.

I could choose any one,

But which one was it going to be?


I looked in through the fist door.


Not knowing what to expect,

In there I saw myself, a loser in every respect.

I was doing whatever I wanted,

The others taking me for granted.

I was suffering and so were they,

I hoped there would be another way.


I then peeked in through the second door.


Tentative, wondering what I’d find behind the screen,

I again saw myself living someone else’s dream.

I was doing whatever they wanted,

The others still took me for granted.

I was suffering and so were they,

I again hoped there would be another way.


I then barged in through the third door.


Not caring if the sky was grey or blue,

I again saw myself, among a friend or two.

They lived my life and I lived theirs’,

We all worked in unison like gears.

I helped them, they helped me,

This was exactly the way it was supposed to be!


-Mayank Singh

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ive said it once, and ill say it again . . . great effort mate . . .

Mayhem said...

Thanks.....

smriti sharma said...

nyc poem mayank...bt dat 10 yrs shit ws scary man....

Mayhem said...

Thanks a lot!!! Nice to see new faces on the blog!!! Keep visiting!!!

Anonymous said...

Cute blog.. jus keep it updated... its gud for the starter.. show ur creativity dude...

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Mayhem said...

The "ten minutes shit" refers to the video posted by Tapas (the one in which the little girl turns into a witch). Please read the poem for God's sake.... It's on YOUR blog!!!!!!!!!